tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4690119989265676870.post4582374895279923088..comments2023-03-25T15:32:51.744+02:00Comments on Mine for the Taking: Chapter One: On the Edge (Part II)FreeFoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4690119989265676870.post-68175992594057418582010-11-18T08:48:57.599+02:002010-11-18T08:48:57.599+02:00The prob is probably that I learned my English in ...The prob is probably that I learned my English in part from my father (only for a short while), and from family visits to England, but in a large part also from reading books, and later from travelling - which includes travelling to a lot of places where I talk English with other non-native English speakers. I think for a non-native speaker my vocab is pretty good, but it just isn't consistant with truly living English of any single place or time. I have no idea if that is enough of a problem to make me writing impossible in the end...FreeFoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00096319447345952569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4690119989265676870.post-71534335881556534952010-11-15T04:30:37.906+02:002010-11-15T04:30:37.906+02:00The inconsistent vocab keeps making me wonder -- d...The inconsistent vocab keeps making me wonder -- deep vocab use, taking the time to put <em>apostrophe</em> 'Nessa instead of just Nessa, then using "peeps"... <br /><br />I'm not sure if it's drawing me in to the character or just highlighting the usual issues with language, (in)formality and storytelling.<br /><br />The occasional details of the past(juvie and so on) fit great with the line of thought progression from part 1.Andrewhttp://godwillbegod.com/blognoreply@blogger.com